At the beginning of this year, I wrote a paragraph on a creature called ‘The Sea Wasp,’ in the middle of the year I wrote the same paragraph and you can see how much I have improved. The first paragraph is the one I made at the beginning of the year and the second one I made in the middle of the year.
The Deadliest Creature Alive
The sea wasp is venomous which has posing ability greater than a snake and it is in the jellyfish family. In its search for food a diver may get stung form its deadly sting witch makes you limp and you can die in seconds. It is transparent which makes it very hard to see it is not found in Europe or in the USA it is found in the beaches of Australia. Its poison can kill over fifty people which makes it the deadliest creature alive.
The Deadliest Creature Alive
In the ocean, the most venomous jellyfish is the Sea Wasp which has a poisoning ability greater than any snake. In its search for food, it may come across a swimmer. If the swimmer gets stung he/she will stagger back to shore. The Sea Wasp is hard to see because it is transparent which means it is very difficult to notice. It is not found in Europe or the USA. It is found on Australia’s beaches. Its neurotoxin can kill approximately fifty people which is why it is the deadliest creature alive.
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